spoils
slap slap slap
of the soup
sliding its slimy self
onto shore
a seaweed salad
over-dosed
in balsamic
shiny at the surface
slick-toxic
lurks under
neath
gasps and glugs
as pools plugged
with gunk
another live one
sunk
the dirge-pipe
of a gull
lulls us all
senseless
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very vivid descriptions Kat,
Juliet Wilson said this on July 11, 2010 at 2:26 pm |
I agree with Juliet. The imagery here is vivid and resonates strongly when read aloud.
Jeffrey said this on July 14, 2010 at 11:30 pm |
the dirge-pipe
of a gull
lulls us all
senseless
Powerful words and timely topic!
Katherine Gotthardt said this on July 15, 2010 at 8:04 am |